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Blue Light  [E]
Magic seeps into the air
by Roari ∞
Review of Blue Light  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What a lovely poem! The rhyme scheme and verse structure work to conjure the magic of the hour. Beautifully done! I love all of it, but must mention that owls asking who made me smile.

And this line tripped my reading a bit.
a silvery, moonlight-drenched night brings.

A special note on the way you've mentioned the prompt as a dropnote at the beginning, giving the reader the choice when to read it. I read it after I'd enjoyed the poem once just as is. Thank you for the explanation of the rhyme scheme and form. I re-read the poem after reading the note, too.

Suggestion - WritingML! Font, italics, center. Somehow I can visualise this poem in 'times', italics, with a bit more line-spacing.

WriteOn!


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