This reads a little like non-information. I can see that you tried to explain how the law of the universe functions, but I don't understand the warning or statement within. For one, the drop note that you inserted is not working. This might be a technical issue with my screen layout, but the dropnote opens in the right sidebar and I can't read what it says. I use a desktop computer with a large monitor, so it is not due to a small screen size. The other reason why this piece is a little non-descript is that it seems English may not be your first language, so your sentences have a lot of words in them, but their meaning is not fully explored. The second sentence: "The a lot more notion, desire or strength [...]" is not clear. What do you mean by a lot more notion?
As you see, this could use some clean up. Maybe just type out the additional information that you currently have in the dropnote also.