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My Safe Harbor  [13+]
A poem about love; a gentle rain on a tranquil sea.
by Redtowrite
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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This one showed up on Random Reads.

It's a lyrical poem with some lovely images and emotions. It speaks of a love that endures and stays strong over the years. The words chosen work well to evoke the mood of a gentle romance. I like the little note at the end, too!

Suggestions:
1. Some WritingML, like color, font, size and center.
2. In some verses, you follow a rhyme scheme, and in others, you don't. Maybe you could standardize that for smoother reading.
Thanks for sharing this!
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