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 Do We Exist Open in new Window. [E]
Think this a silly question? I put forth that we may not exist, at least, not how we think
by Dr Gonzo Author Icon
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Review by Starling Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Title: Review: Do We Exist by Dr. Gunzo - Sci-fi


The opinions contained in this review are subjective, with the intent to be honest and helpful.
Please take that which you find useful, and toss the rest with good cheer. {/center}


Title and Author: Do We Exist by Dr. Gunzo


Plot::
The author puts across the theory we only exist because we think we exist. They ask many questions which don’t all have clear answers when you are trying to prove existence.

Hook:
The hook is presented in the first sentence. “ Proving existence is not as straightforward as one might think. Looking into a mirror and THINKING we are...therefore we must be, is not proof that we exist.” The reader is drawn into the essay to see if they disagree or agree with the author’s reasoning.

Opening Sentence and Paragraph:
As mentioned above the first sentence asks a question many have thought about.

Dialogue:
This is an essay. All dialogue is internal.

Punctuation and Structure:
Punctuation is all correct. A few words are redundant, like “really”, “actually and “own” but none of them are incorrect in their usage.

Closing Statement
I enjoyed reading this essay. You did very well asking questions about a complicated subject. I love reading philosophical questions which have no answer. Our brain perceives we exist, but the brain is only a computer, programmed by … If the brain is self-programming then as any computer, it drops information it doesn’t think relevant. It concentrates on information it can relate to as a working possibility. Maybe the information if figures are not valued is the exact information needed. I hope I am making sense here.

Thank you for posting.

Starling


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