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Greetings, Lili J. - On/Offline! I discovered this piece on the Read & Review page and was drawn in by it. *Smile*


*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* So simply portrayed about being betrayed. Simple is sometimes better, especially when it says so much!
         *Bullet* Passionate promises exposed. Nicely done. Funny what "they" say that doesn't quite turn out that way.


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* I have no suggestions.

Final Thoughts

         More readers than not, will be able to connect to this piece! Nicely written. Great job!



Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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