Hi Tabby,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the truth not being in pictures. I had a torrid childhood, but our family portrait shows a stable, happy family, so I can certainly identify with the feelings of the speaker in the poem. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has a unique rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.