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Hello, ridinghhood-p.boutilier ![]() I'm sending this review as part of I Write in 2019. This is my second review to be eligible for the special merit badge at the end of the year. I chose this poem. ![]() ![]() I'm not 100% sure I understand what's being said here, but I like the line "lavender in my pocket." It's a reference I can understand. Almost makes me think of those little sachets people use to make their clothes smell nice. ![]() ![]() I've never heard of a mgur poem before. A little author's note explaining the form would be helpful. Also, the blurb at the bottom...I'm not sure I understand it. What is HerbCrafter's Tarot? I'm assuming "this luxury" is in bold because it has something to do with the Writer's Cramp prompt? ![]() ![]() I didn't notice anything here. ![]() ![]() This is a subtle poem with nice imagery, playing on the sense of smell. Good luck in the contest! IceSkating SugarCube
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