Reviewing this as a fellow participant in "I Write in 2019"  [E]

First impression: I appreciate proper punctuation in a poem, and it looks like you used the prompt word well.

Suggestions: I don't really have any; this is a short poem that fits the prompt and the form.

Overall: Probably just me, but I wasn't clear on what the actual subject was. Archaeology? But then "divine enlightenment" doesn't fit well. Then I thought of something like Frankenstein, but I don't have a lot of clues in the poem itself to back that up. Like I said, I'm probably just dense. The title of the poem doesn't shed much light on it. Still, like I said, good form and good use of prompt word.

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