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The Perfect Love Open in new Window. [E]
Can a man find perfect love? Yes! (Humor)
by 🌕 HuntersMoon Author Icon
Review of The Perfect Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Well, you know the perfect love
Won't ever watch baseball
When the kid needs help with math
Or when grandma comes to call.

And he won't forget to buy
The groceries on the list
In short, it's not just 'she' that's perfect,
Ken, you get my gist? *Ha*

And the best of all is when
You have a little pup
You'll never find the toilet seat
Carelessly left up!

(Insert emoticon for 'gotcha!')

Nice poem about true love. And somewhere beneath all that humour and fun ... a tiny grain of truth? Ah, maybe, maybe not. A fun poem, anyway.

Suggestions -- to add 'animal' as a genre, and to use some WritingML like font, colour, center.

Woof On,
Sonali.

Happy 2019!

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