The Perfect Love [E] Can a man find perfect love? Yes! (Humor) |
Well, you know the perfect love Won't ever watch baseball When the kid needs help with math Or when grandma comes to call. And he won't forget to buy The groceries on the list In short, it's not just 'she' that's perfect, Ken, you get my gist? And the best of all is when You have a little pup You'll never find the toilet seat Carelessly left up! (Insert emoticon for 'gotcha!') Nice poem about true love. And somewhere beneath all that humour and fun ... a tiny grain of truth? Ah, maybe, maybe not. A fun poem, anyway. Suggestions -- to add 'animal' as a genre, and to use some WritingML like font, colour, center. Woof On, Sonali. Happy 2019! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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