Hi Christianna, I am reviewing your short story "My Kids Are Grounded" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This short story is about a mother, who is the very essence of a well, mother. Her children are testing her patience, while she is attempting to cook. The boys are rough housing in the living, and she's about ten seconds from apparently choking her eldest son. Much to my amusement

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short seems to be well written. I have nothing to suggest to you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common grammar or spelling errors.

But I did have one problem to be honest, the first sentence kinda confuses me: Why does it seem like my kids always like to be in trouble? Would this not read better as: Why does it seem like my kids always like get in trouble?

♥ Overall: I felt the moms frustration through out this book, but I also felt a sens of normalcy and humor. I enjoyed this short family oriented story. It was a really cute story to read.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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