Hey sindbad, I am reviewing your poem "Thirty Days" on behalf of games of thrones here on WDC.

Rhythm/Rhyme: I enjoyed this free verse immensely. I loved how your words flowed.

Imagery: Your provided a detailed description of how you perceived your girl to be. I felt the emotions pouring out of you through this poem. I felt how much you missed her, how much you yearned to be near her, but at the same time because of all the days that separated the two of you, you both are unsure of where you stand with one another,

Impressions: This was a great poem, it presented us with a lot of emotion and I physically felt the feelings that you were feeling. I loved the narrators view point of his girl, I loved how he saw her. You could tell that he thinks highly of her, thank you so much for writing such an awesome piece, and I look forward to reading more of your writing.

This review was written freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely.

Note: I am writing on my ipad and my spelling may be slightly off, please excuse any typos.


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