Hi Azrael Watches Over The Queen, I am reviewing your short story "The Case Of The Palimpsest" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ Oh, well played Callaghan well played. This mystery short is about a woman named Madam Vargas and a detective named Callaghan. Madam Vargas calls on the detective to solve a case for her, she wants to know whether or not someone had broken into her home and attempted to steal her picture.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: I only have one suggestion that I would like to make, but let me be clear, this suggestion in no way detracts from the story.

"Off went the hat to reveal thin brown hair neatly combed to the side, as the man bowed politely." That sentence seems to be a bit "off" to me, and while I understand why you worded it that way, I think you could structure that sentence a bit better than that in my opinion.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: Your short story seemed to be well written. I spotted no common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: This was a really good mystery novel. Albeit predictable, but still very well written and does garner a re-read.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

House Greyjoy - "Game of Thrones"