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Remnants Open in new Window. [GC]
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Rated: GC | (5.0)
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Rhythm/Rhyme
Good rhythm, rhyme, and flow throughout. It started with a gentleness and moved in intensity all the way to the last line. It was powerful and sweet, moving and seductive all wrapped around a vivid memory.

Imagery
You definitely painted quite the picture of a night of lovemaking between this couple. It was easy to see it as you described the aspects that he found sensual, fascinating and tantalizing in his lover. Great descriptions not just of the act itself, but how she feels in his arms, what he tastes and hears that pull this poem together.

Impressions
You captured all of the wonderful elements of one passion-filled night really well. I loved how he awoke alone, but her scent lingers on the sheets and encompassing him, catapulting him right back to the night before. He becomes lost to the memories, to every sensation as it plays out like a movie of this one night of passion. Even at the end, he knows that this will happen again and he's already looking forward to it. This is a great testament to the beauty of love and what it inspires.



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