Hello, iguanamountain

What I liked

I loved that you put so much thought into your settings. I've never seen this done before, but it's great. It should be a great aid to writing and potentially for readers should this be designed for later inclusion in your story.

What might need work

I really wanted to read what was happening in the bubbles, but with my normal browser setting, the writing was too small. So, I zoomed in, but then the small print became blurred.

I'm a newbie here and not very techy, but I suspect you need to upload this as two images and then place them side by side so that you can create a larger sized image. If you check out my item: "Only Chapter One "  you'll see how I've done that to create a larger banner that's also clear.

Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob