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A review for the House of Greyjoy


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Review of Pretty Mary

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A creepy story about an antique porcelain doll who comes to life and in a sense is responsible for the death of two sisters.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The porcelain doll is named Caroline. The two sisters are Sarah and Mary. Their brother Jake wants the money from the insurance settlement. He tells Mary that he had pushed Sarah down the stairs and killed her. She locks the door so Jake can't do the same to her. Somehow it seems that Caroline becomes alive. Mary throws Caroline down the stairs to break her and Caroline bites Mary with sharp white fangs (she is just a doll). Caroline eventually causes Mary to fall down the stairs and taunts Mary by telling her that Jake will be blamed. Of course who would blame a doll.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Sounds like a good story for a creepy horror movie.

dblameck


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