Hello, This was a very descriptive story. You have a way with words.
The story line kept me entertained and it moved along well. You have a good balance of setting and story to keep the reader reading and yet not lose the situation in the story.
The characters were realistic and likable. I honestly enjoy reading erotic and romantic stories. This was worth reading. I like the fact that she eventually became uninhibited by what was going on around her. Sometimes we just need to feel what is happening and let go instead of wondering what everyone else is doing.
You moved the story along well and I could feel what she was going through in the story. The ending was realistic, I thought that maybe she might have imagined the whole thing but then her best friend was standing there. That was a nice twist.
I did not find any grammatical errors or spelling errors.
My favorite paragraph is the second or third one where the guy comes up behind her and they begin to dance.
Question though, if he was her best friend shouldn't she have known who it was by his smell or was it just one of those mixed things where you don't realize and just let yourself experience something new and exciting and different?
Anyway, Thank you for writing, keep up the good work.



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