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A NIGHT TO REMEMBER Open in new Window. [E]
A story to share .
by Mary Ann MCPhedran Author Icon
Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Review of A Night to Remember

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review is part of the requirement in the Game of Thrones. I am reviewing for the House of Greyjoy.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I can imagine your first book signing would definitely be an occasion to remember. The events of that evening are detailed as one would in a blog or diary.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

It seems the event occurred in a multi-use setting. Perhaps a mall or plaza. It is referred to the Cube. It is obvious that all this occurred in her home town of Corby, Northamptonshire England. Her writing group helped to fill out the numbers for this event.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Define who are the people mentioned: Roseanne, Kath. The mother is mentioned but am unsure of who she is. what are twig lets?


FINAL THOUGHTS:

I am glad you had this event for your book launch of Honey Dew.

dblameck





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