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Given: Jun 6, 2016 at 11:54am
Length: 698 Characters |
612 w/o WritingML
Hello it's me again. Your freindly neighbor hood reviewer. So ive noticed something about your poems. At the end of each paragraph or what ever you want to call it you put the same thing on everyone. Like for instance you did
"In the dark of the Night."
At the end of all but 2 of the paragraphs or sentences. Is that a forum of poetry or is that what you enjoy writing the most? I just found it most intresting though.
I also enjoyed the way you ended it by saying
"In the light of Day."
Great mix up.
Well thats it for now. I will see you later!
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