Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC.
This is a Simply Positive Review!
I needed to read something like this, at this exact moment.
I so enjoyed your humorous poem which painted vivid picture about an "Ex," and the jubilation felt by his ex-wife is obvious throughout the poem.
Your poem keeps up a good pace, most of the way through, with just a wordier third stanza, that slows the reader down a bit. That one made me go back and read it twice to see if it was just my reading. Well, maybe it is me, but I it's still wordier than the other lines.
Nevertheless, the poem as whole, does entertain and amuse. You put a smile on my face after a long, couple days of "things needed to get done."
Thank you for sharing this amusing and quirky piece. Well done!
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