Hello Svetashev . Welcome to WDC! I'm Charlie. Thanks for sharing your writing with us. I hope this review finds you well.


Title/General Thoughts/Subject Matter: I read the title like "résumé" the first time. I think I have too much work on the mind. After reading the poem, I think it's a fitting title. It's like resuming your writing on a new site and meeting new people. Great attitude for a new member of WDC!


What Worked: The second stanza was definitely the strongest here. I liked the "poetry dance" part and the idea of it stirring the site up. I hope you're right about that, and I think you'll find that people are always friendly and willing to help you with your writing here. I think you'll see major improvements in your writing if you read the reviews you get and take the suggestions into consideration.

I also loved the last line because I think it's good to go into new experiences with little in the way of plans and expectations. I mean, it's okay to have a certain idea of how you want to do things, but you have to be flexible, especially when you're learning or meeting new people.


Technical Issues/Suggestions: There is a typo here:

I will be try
as well as can

Maybe a couple typos, actually.

Other than that, the first stanza is super weak compared to the other two. That's good and bad. Bad because, well, it's weak. Good because it makes the other two look even better. Really though, the first stanza is your chance to hook readers and this opening stanza doesn't do the job. I'm not sure what it even means, but it seems like the focus is on rhyming rather than introducing the topic. I didn't really see the topic of the poem come about until the second stanza.


Final Thoughts: Overall, I think this is a cool topic for a poem and I hope to see a lot more of you around here. I can't wait to see your writing improve with time and effort. Thanks again for sharing with us!


Best wishes,




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .