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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

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What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* A man is sent to end the source of his own being, his father. The father is an all powerful self appointed God-like symbol for the world. The son is the only one who could reasonably achieve phsyical proximity to his father.

The smell that is referenced deals with the aftermath and how the son will remember the whole event, which seems like a major life event any way you look at it.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I like that it is present action and its aftermath that triggers a future memory. Dad always loved this place is the thing that echoed with me. Maybe that makes it somehow alright. It seems like a bitter irony for Dad to end up this way in the place he loved.

Very creative!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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