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Greetings Charlie ~ !



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You sent me a very nice review, so I came to graze in your pasture and read and send a review. This caught my attention because of recent headlines about overnighters in the Chicago Airport.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I liked the picture. The first stanza definitely describes to me an airport in the U.S., where you have windows that look out on the action. I was in the airport in Shannon Ireland many times and there are no windows in the waiting area there, until you get way out to the gate right before boarding. All you see is the plane.

The second stanza deals with inebriation, whether or not it happens. I never really notice people drinking in the airport because I'm too nervous about the flight to pay attention to their drinking habits much. I just hope to God the pilot and co-pilot are sober.

The third stanza is about some thoughts directed toward the early boarding crowd. I wish they would get seated and not block the blank blank aisle. Suddenly they have the ability to stand and move about, once on board ahead of the rest of us.

The fourth stanza is about people at the destination maybe - family members? Or it could be families interacting around a non family member, the poet. That just makes me shiver at the idea of all those distant relatives swarming in. It never goes well in my experience. The best part is the first meeting at the airport.

The last two stanzas find meaning in existence even if it is not crucial to others agendas. That is how I read it, could be all wrong I guess.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*This was my favorite part:

"I'm nothing
and everything all at once to the
strangers in the airport lobby."

Well, I would only say that we are all nothing to the big corporate machines and the government. To each other - I don't know. I would hope for something more. Maybe you excite the imagination of your fellow travelers. You never know. I like to think I excite them and I bet you do too. They wonder about the mysterious fellow.

I make up stories in my head about other people on the plane. You never know who has you in mind because it's something beyond your control.

Brilliant poem - happy travels. Stay away from Chicago Airports!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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