Lost on the wind [E] breathe and relax. |
A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? You sent me a very nice review, so here I am to read and review in your port. I looked in the folder called "Lies" to find this poem. What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? I think you describe an idyllic time in one's life. The funny thing about times like these is that I never realized it at the time, that is, that I should have stopped and thought about it. It is more about just enjoying it at the time. Then, when I think about it, I wish I could go back and not focus on the wrong things. When I've been in awesome settings, I invariably zeroed in on something trivial, not the surroundings. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? This was my favorite part: "I've buried my delighted toes in caressing sands of misplaced time." This made me close my eyes and picture a beach many moons ago. Lovely language with every word carefully chosen. Oh, to be lost on that wind and those gentle breezes one more time. I hope with hindsight now, I would get it, but would I really? Fun to dream about it, that's for sure! Wonderful poetry! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I travel to many galaxies and pick my reading carefully, just as I pick my hay carefully. END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
|