Hi kendall , welcome to Writing.Com! I found your piece on the random review page and thought I'd give it a look. I hope you'll find some of my suggestions useful!

What I liked:
I think many teens can easily relate to your story- braces and glasses. Yikes! My sister and I both had that, but I think the "nerd" look is becoming more common, so being called a "nerd" isn't as common anymore.

General things I noticed/specific suggestions:
Your story is mostly in past tense, so "has" should be "had" when you say "she has braces and glasses"

Spelling/Grammar:
"your" should be "you're", for "you are"
"weather" should be "whether"
Make sure you capitalize the first letter of your sentence. The "a" in "and when she" should be capitalized.

Overall, poor Maddie! It's hard enough going to a new school, but thinking that you look like a nerd must be even worse! I'm hoping you add on to this piece, because I am curious about what happens to Maddie when she actually gets to school.
Make sure to check your spelling for similar-sounding words.
Otherwise, good job on this and keep writing!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .