Hi Fyn

Happy WDC Anniversary!!
I'm Samberine Everose one of your friends and fans here in Writing Dot Com.
and I'm here to give you a review as my to you this awesome WDC Anniversary.

The TITLE-
The first thing that did hook me when I visited your poetfolio to look for something to review is the given title of this piece of yours.
Poetsvision- I liked the combination of these two words, every poet have different visions, the way they see things or reflect things.
I just curious if you intently wrote it in that way, no space between the two words Poets and vision.
Anyway it hook me, it's a kind of interesting.
I liked also the word doodle on the short description there, in arts/architecture, for me doodle are simple or circular and moving.
That made me look on it as interesting.
Good job in alluring a reader.

The BODY-
Wow! All lines are true about a poet.
You hit every line on what I(we) feel.
Maybe you can add more lines using others senses like the touch, the smell etc.
But anyway, the way how it was crafted- short makes this piece extremely beautiful, because you make/let the reader get (I) into deep thoughts.

Until next reviewing, and keep smiling while stay in Writing and Reviewing.

Regards




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .