Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 4-8-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

The heroes of war returning from the fray.
The war is won but the impact will forever remain.
That;s imagery that drew this response.
Form and structure are distinctive.
Rhyme scheme lends a cadence to the piece.
Flow is soft and smooth.
Pace is slow, as if the march will never end, until at last it is finished.
Grammatically speaking your piece is pristine.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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