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Sweet Magpie  [E]
my morning alarm magpie
by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Mina~

This is a delightful little poem that really put a smile on my face. First time I've heard of someone being woken up every morning by the song of a magpie. Very original and fun. Early in the poem, 'word' should have an s on the end.

Otherwise great work *Bigsmile*

Best wishes,
Mark


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