Wow! I love this poem. The imagery is so distinctive, and you've used Synaesthesia to wonderful effect. I especially love the bit about hearing the brightness of the moon.
Reading this poem reminds me of our visit to the Van Gogh museum in Amsterdam
The wreathed sestet, a form I hadn't heard of before really suits your style and as usual you show an impeccable ear for the sound of the words and how they fit together.
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