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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello J. Lee

This is a delightfully original poem which put a smile on my face. You've put a lot of thought into this and I love the wordplay throughout the poem. I especially enjoyed the line in your first stanza about the ear in the middle of heard.

Truly listening to others is so important and this poem does a good job of highlighting that point amidst the fun.

The only thing I wasn't quite sure of was if in your second stanza you meant 'two finish tears' to be the number two or if that was a typo and you meant 'to'. Either way, it doesn't diminish the impact of the poem. I think such a creative, thoughtful piece is well deserving of five stars.

Congratulations on having it featured in the poetry newsletter.

Best wishes,
Mark


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