Oh! To Be an Ocelot [E] A pretty cat poem |
In the mood for nature scenes, Looking in the auto=rewards things. Finding your title; I was intrigued. The description only further drew. A kitty on a morning romp, Dreaming of being an Ocelot. Form as light as air, Structure secure in the confines of the lines. Rhyming in a melodious beat, The reader is given quite the treat. Flowing up hill, over dale, and to the end, At a pace as playful as the cat on the prowl. Can you tell that the imagery is contagious? It inspired the entirety of this review. Because you imbued the poem with such clarity. Nary a grammatical snafu was espied, No suggestions for improvement are needed today. Write on! Copenator out! BA, M Div ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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