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Given: Sep 1, 2014 at 12:41pm
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Hello! I like to review poetry using Dave's on family time.'s method of analyzing poems. I enjoy reading poetry and learn from reading and reviewing other's poems to see what works and what doesn't.
TITLE:Perfect title for this small collection of windy Haiku.
IMAGERY:
This is why I love short form poetry. So much imagery in so few words. Elegant words used well.
Literal imagery My favorite was Dormarth because I am partial to dogs, legendary or not and I could picture my own dogs running like that.
Figurative imagery The second poem has me thinking. What are you bringing to mind? I am not sure with this one.
STRUCTURE & FORM:I am not a haiku expert, but I enjoy your form for these poems. They almost seem to blow across the page
OVERALL IMPRESSION:I think you are a poet I will be coming back to read.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
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