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 Three winds Open in new Window. [E]
Three thematically linked haikai revolving around wind.
by Dan O'Shanter Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello! I like to review poetry using Dave's on family time. Author IconMail Icon's method of analyzing poems. I enjoy reading poetry and learn from reading and reviewing other's poems to see what works and what doesn't.


TITLE:Perfect title for this small collection of windy Haiku.


IMAGERY:
This is why I love short form poetry. So much imagery in so few words. Elegant words used well.

Literal imagery My favorite was Dormarth because I am partial to dogs, legendary or not and I could picture my own dogs running like that.

Figurative imagery The second poem has me thinking. What are you bringing to mind? I am not sure with this one.


STRUCTURE & FORM:I am not a haiku expert, but I enjoy your form for these poems. They almost seem to blow across the page


OVERALL IMPRESSION:I think you are a poet I will be coming back to read.
I look forward to reading more of your work.






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