You've got some good intrigue going on in your entry, and you provide just enough information to get a good sense of the circumstances. There were only a few minor things I noticed:

It sounds like Jayce and Janice engaged willingly, even if under orders, but the implication that it wasn't consensual (I assume because it was under orders) also makes it sound like it may actually have been rape.

"Jayce put on shorts and opened the door to see his brother, Michael, no less." This sort of makes it sound like he has multiple brother it could have been because of the "no less" at the end.

Seems like Janice should be well aware that he knew she was just carrying out orders; the only question is if she knew why.

Overall, a good read. Good luck in the next round!

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