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Rated: GC · Interactive · Adult · #873111
Jims BIG Spring Break trip turns to horror when tainted tanning lotion Shrinks his world
This choice: Make him clean out the toe jam between his toes  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

Flattened

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"Hmm, well as long as you're right there..." Joe said with a devilish grin as he wiggled his toes around Jim. "Start licking, pipsqueak."

Jim was astounded. "What? Licking?"

Joe's smile dropped from his face in an instant, and Jim quickly realized the full extent of his situation. The full danger. Joe didn't say a thing, but he did start pressing his foot harder down on Jim's tiny body. Jim closed his eyes and gritted his teeth, anticipating the pain of having his body crushed beneath this cruel giant's foot, but nothing happened. His body was not crushed.

Jim opened his eyes to see Joe's face every bit as astonished as his own. Jim looked down toward his crushed body and understood, it was crushed beneath his friend's foot, but he hadn't felt anything. He could still feel his body now, feeling just the same as if nothing had happened at all, he could feel it against Joe's skin, but he felt no pain. Jim looked back toward Joe, but his view was instantly obscured when Joe moved his foot upward, so that Jim's face was covered too. Then, he pressed down again. Once again, Jim felt his face being pressed against Joe's foot, and this time he had a vague understanding of the fact that it was being flattened, but he still felt no pain. After several minutes, Joe finally pulled his foot away again. Jim's body immediately started expanding again. It took less than thirty seconds for it to regain its normal shape.

"Shit man, this stuff really did fuck you up," Joe mused, looking again at the bottle of lotion in his hand. He looked like he was about to say more when Ron's voice spoke up from nearby.

"Hey, Joe!" Ron called, coming closer. "Have you seen Jim yet?"

Joe quickly covered Jim again with his foot, even flattening him beneath his sole again without even meaning to. As Ron approached, Joe made a quick decision on how to handle the situation.

You have the following choices:

1. He decides to show Jim to Ron.

2. He suggests Ron use the suntan lotion.

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