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New people at Hogwarts. Fun, Fun, Fun! Love and freindship. Triumph and tragedy.
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Chapter #4

on the train

    by: Unknown
You weren’t in the mood to talk; especially to people you didn’t know. You and Derrick board the train, and find an empty compartment near the back. It seemed to be less hectic, and you like it when it was calm. It gave you the chance to draw or write poetry. You sit down, and get your drawing pad out of your Jan Sport; you were about to start your new piece when the compartment door swings open. You look up to see two guys, and a girl with bushy hair.

“Sorry, don’t really see many people near the back of the train,” A boy with gaping green eyes and messy black hair say taking a step back.

“It’s ok, um… I’m Maria, and this is my cousin Derrick.” Derrick gave a dirty look to the girl with bushy hair, ‘must be a mud-blood’ you think to yourself.

“Sorry, I’m Harry Potter, and this is Ron Weasley, and Hermione Granger,” he said pointing out each person.

“You should find your own compartment, we’re full here.” Snaps your cousin’s best friend Draco Malfoy

“Didn’t know you counted as company.” Hermione snaps

“Watch your mouth, you little mud-blood.” Derrick retorts back.

“Maria? So the rumors are true the Simmons clan transferred here,” Draco says smiling “I didn’t know Derrick was bringing you on this little adventure.” He says stepping into the compartment

“You learns something new everyday,” You say showing him your flirtatious smile.

“I guess so,” he says sitting beside you.

“Better leave, we wouldn’t want to catch the stench” Hermione snapped pulling the others out of the compartment, you catch Harry’s eyes and smile at me.

“So do you guys want anything? I’m dying of thirst” Derrick says standing up

“Could you get me something to drink?” You ask kindly

“Sure, want anything Draco?” He asks he asks heading out

“A drink sounds great” Draco said not breaking eye contact with you

“Alright, be back in a minute,” and with that you and Draco were left alone.

“So what’s up, haven’t seen you in like, what four years?” He says showing you his pearly whites.

“Nothing really, I’ve been doing a lot more art, and stuff like that.” You say leaning back in your seat

He chuckles “Why doesn’t that surprise me, you were always drawing even at dinner. I have to admit though you’ve grown up more beautifully then I’d expected,” his cheeks turn a shade of pink, but soon goes back to it’s pale white.

“That’s sweet of you to say” You say smiling back

Draco inches closer to you, and just as he’s about to kiss you the door swings open, and the two of you part quickly. Derrick hands the two of you the drinks, and sits down himself. He notices your flushed cheeks, and grins and Draco.

“So did you two find anything to talk about while I was gone,” He asks opening his butter beer

“I’d say so.” Draco said smiling at you

“So…. How’s life back at the Malfoy Manor?” You ask changing the subject quickly

“Couldn’t be better, father’s working on the new plan with Voldemort. And who knows, by the end of the year, out family’s could be sitting in luxury beyond our wildest dreams.” He says opening up his bottle.

An hour or so later, the two guys leave to go deal with ‘business’ leaving you alone to work on your art in peace. You got out your pad, and a freshly sharpened pencil. You let the lines flow on the paper, and you go off into your own world of peace and tranquility. You get out your colored pencils, and add color to your world. Draco and Derrick return, and catch you off guard.

“Looks like someone’s been day dreaming again.” Derrick said chuckling

“That’s POTTER!” Draco snapped swiping your drawing from your grasps.

“What?” You ask snapping out of your trance

“Why did you draw Potter?” He snapped throwing the paper back at me

I picked it up, and looked at it. Harry’s emerald green eyes were starring back up at me through the portrait. You were at a loss of words, you drew your cousin’s and his friend’s worse enemy, and worse of all, you didn’t even know you draw him. You just shut your pad, and get out as fast as you could. You open a nearby compartment, and run in without even checking if it was empty. You sit down, when you noticed you were in a room filled with guys, older guys. You notice one of the guys was the boy who helped you find the platform.

“Sorry, I didn’t know anyone was in here.” You blush standing up, but Oliver’s gentle hand pulls you back down.

“It’s ok, you can stay…. What was your name again?” He asked leaning back in his seat.

“Maria Simmons” you say smiling gratefully, you noticed the two red heads from before, besides being twins they looked kind of like Ron.

“This is Fred, and George Weasley, and Alex Fleming.” He said pointing to the guy next to the window; he had dark blue eyes and shaggy black hair.

“Are you related to Ron?” you ask raising a brow

“Yeap, don’t tell me he harassed you already.” The one you thought was George said snickering.

“Don’t worry he didn’t harass me, I don’t he got the chance with my cousin there and all.” You say weakly leaning back in your seat.

“So Maria, what year are you transferring in?” Fred asked looking at you

“I’m transferring into my fifth year.” You say in monotone, had to be the sixth time you answered that question.

“Yes!” was all you could hear, from the boy sitting by the window.

“Looks like you’re stuck with my brother, and his friends.” George joked happily

“Perfect, you can meet my brother, he’s in Slytherin though” Oliver said warning you

“It’s ok, I’m used to Slytherins already” You say grinning, a few minutes later a boy walked in your age, he had shaggy brown hair, and deep black eyes like his brother. You had to admit he was ten times cuter than his brother.

“Ahh… speak of the devil.” Oliver starts grinning “Tyler, this our fifth year transfer Maria Simmons, Maria this is Tyler my little brother.”

“I prefer younger, I’m almost as tall as you remember?” He said smacking his brother on the back, he looked at you and smiled making your heart flutter.
“Nice to meet you” He said smiling, while extending his hand. You take it, and he kisses it lightly.

“Wait…. Did you say Simmons? Your cousin’s looking for you, so is half the Slytherin house.” He said chuckling

“Well, here I am” You shrug, and he laughs.

Within the hour you arrive at Hogwarts, you head into the Great Hall to be sorted…….

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