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Your worst enemy has become aware of your biggest weakness
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Chapter #4

The crowd gets involved!

    by: Ralph75 Author IconMail Icon

You lay there on the warm asphalt, but even in the summer heat, Julia’s urine is starting to cool on you. You feel paralyzed, but even if you could move what could you do? There’s a crowd of fifty adults here laughing at you and uploading the most humiliating thing imaginable for the entire world to see right now! Just then Julia’s voice cuts through the din.

“Who’s next? Let’s make sure this piece of shit never raises a hand to a woman again!”

You scramble to your knees and beg for all your worth.

“Please Julia don’t! You’ve already won! You kicked my ass and pissed all over me, you win! Please don’t do this!”

She doesn’t say a word, just smirks at you and then front kicks you in the chest. Knocking you backward on the ground. What follows is a waterfall of piss, spit, and insults. Some people don’t join in, but at least thirty of those in attendance add to the soup of liquid waste you’re lying in. Women your age and slightly older, women in their 40s and 50s, and even the guys you were playing basketball with eagerly drench you in urine while it goes viral on the internet. You don’t protest or beg, that’s useless at this point. You simply squeeze your eyes and mouth shut as tight as you can while the deluge continues.

Eventually, the crowd disperses and leaves you lying in a veritable lake of pee. You don’t know it yet but you’ve already become a hashtag (#pissboy). Julia is the last person left on the court. She’s sitting on a nearby bench scrolling through her phone and smiling quite contentedly to herself. And why shouldn’t she? She has turned you, a boy who had made her life hell...into a complete laughing stock. Slowly you drag yourself up to your hands and knees, your clothes as heavy with liquid as if you’d just climbed out of a pool. Only this doesn’t smell half as pleasant as chlorine.

“Done feeling sorry for yourself piss boy?” Julia asks while looking at you. “Good God you look awful.”

You’re still too heartbroken to respond, you just remain there on your hands and knees while the piss of three dozen people drips off of you.

What happens next? Leaves you there

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