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by Juliet Author IconMail Icon
Rated: GC · Interactive · Other · #2296716
Shrink down to the size of a speck around a variety of giantesses at the mall.
This choice: Use your torn-off piece of receipt paper as a last-ditch effort.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

White Flag

    by: boons Author IconMail Icon
Desperation drives the bravest and most irrational of acts. Fingers trembling, you double down on your choice of waving the fragment of receipt paper. As her foot, broad and reddened from hours of walking, begins to slide into the shoe, you push the tiny paper upwards in one final, forlorn attempt to catch her attention.

But the foot's descent is inexorable. As the thick mom maneuvers her foot, her toes – each bulbous, slightly clammy, and bearing the faint imprints of her earlier shoes – splay out, brushing against your minuscule body. Like the fingers of some gargantuan creature, they prod and push you, contorting your body into the tight, toe-crammed confines of the shoe. The paper fragment slips from your grip, lost somewhere amidst the cushioning.

She seems oblivious to your plight, the engrossing nature of her phone and a conversation with Kayla concerning shoe sizes seemingly being of more importance. Her toes clamp down on you, her pinky toe pressing your legs, the neighboring ones holding your torso and arms in a vice-like grip, while her big toe mashes against your head, smothering you in the balmy warmth and slightly salty taste of her skin.

The pressure is surreal, each minor movement she makes with her toes feeling like tectonic plates shifting, grinding, and pressing down on you. The aroma, the sheer overpowering stench of an entire day's worth of foot odor, presses into every one of your senses, so potent you can practically taste the sourness.

And then she rises, deciding to take a walk around the store to get a feel for the shoe. The sensation is like being trapped in a tumultuous earthquake, the pressure fluctuating as she shifts her weight with every step. With each footfall, your puny frame is subjected to the enormous force of her weight. The air gets squeezed out of you in rhythmic pulses as her foot arches and flattens, your malleable form becoming one with the soft fabric of the shoe's insole.

Through the muted sounds of her footfalls, you can faintly hear the chatter between Kayla and the thick mom. Discussions about comfort, style, and a discount. How painfully ironic that you, a mere speck amidst the vast universe of their mundane conversation, might be meeting your end under the foot of a casual shopper.

As she strolls, the continuous movement and force are eroding your strength and will. Vision blurring, consciousness ebbing, you're left hoping that somehow, someone might spot the nearly microscopic speck that you are and rescue you from this increasingly grim situation. But with every step, the weight of that possibility seems to shrink just as you did, disappearing into the cavernous expanse of a Footlocker store.

Your vision blurs and it's tough to think straight under the immense pressure, but a few desperate ideas race through your mind:

You have the following choices:

1. Struggle.

2. Give up.

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