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Rated: GC · Interactive · Other · #2296716
Shrink down to the size of a speck around a variety of giantesses at the mall.
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Chapter #5

Give up.

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As the pressure intensified and the putrid warmth enveloped you further, an overbearing sense of futility washed over you. Why fight? What did you even hope to achieve in this macro world where even the most basic of human interactions had the potential to end your life? Every breath became a labor, with the thick, foul aroma of aged foot sweat hanging heavily in the air, choking you.

Your small frame became ensnared in the squishy prison of her toes, which held you in a viselike grip. With each step she took, you felt her toes squeezing around you, releasing a fresh wave of salty perspiration that soaked through your clothes and made your skin prickle. It wasn't long before your once-dry refuge turned into a suffocating swamp, drowning you in the woman's neglectful foot hygiene.

Resignation floods you. A myriad of thoughts and regrets consume you, amplified by the dizzying aroma of the mother's foot sweat, which had turned the shoe into a rank, stifling atmosphere. The humid air thickens as you breathe heavily, despair weighing you down like a rock.

Sinking deeper into the moist, foul-smelling canvas, your energy dwindles. The woman's foot shifts occasionally, causing a squelching sound that threatens to pull you under like a riptide. Every time her thick toes curl or her arch flexes, it causes ripples in the viscous soup of her sweat, and each time, you're swallowed just a bit more.

The salt stung, burning any open wounds you had, and your eyes blurred as the viscous liquid filled your mouth, nose, and lungs. You choked and spluttered, but there was no reprieve, no fresh breath of air to be found. Your struggles diminished as the overwhelming essence of the thick mom's foot forced its way inside of you, saturating your every pore.

It's not long before you're entirely engulfed, your tiny form becoming just another negligible particle in her damp shoe. You choke and splutter, the pungent odor overpowering your senses. As you fade, the oppressive foot sweat seeps into every orifice, causing your final moments to be ones of sheer torment.

The woman, entirely unaware of the tragic drama unfolding beneath her toes, continues her shopping, idly chatting with Kayla about the comfort of the shoe. The irony of her words isn't lost on you, even in your delirious state.

A while later, feeling a peculiar itch, she removes the shoe and unknowingly peels your limp, lifeless form off her sole, assuming you're just some odd speck of dirt. With a careless flick, she sends you flying across the store, the last remnant of your existence now nothing more than a minuscule smear on the floor.

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