Even though Dereks eyes were burning from the acidic soda soaking his miniscule body, he could still make out the silhouette of the titanic, brown-haired boy who held this plastic prison of his firmly in his hand. When he moved the bottle closer to his godlike face, all remaining doubts were cleared from Dereks mind: This was Adric holding the drink. He was inside his own brothers soda.
It was surreal, seeing his face at this scale. Even though the plastic blurred the colors a little, he could still make out every detail on the young, snarky boys face; how often he had rolled his eyes at him or told him to buzz off. Now, it really didn't matter how he looked at him or what he said. Hell, Adric wasn't even aware of his existence; in fact, he was visibly out of breath, his cheeks were a bit flushed and a pearl of sweat rolled down his forehead. Clearly, he and the other boys were done roughhousing and they all craved some sweet, refreshing Coke. In which he was swimming right now.
Suddenly, Adrics snarky voice echoed around him, making the fizzy liquid vibrate ever so slightly at every word he uttered.
"Check this out, I'm gonna chuck this one!"
And immediately, cheering erupted from all around him as the boys started hyping Adric - and each other - up.
Crap.
Derek had to think, and he had to think fast. There is no way he could survive being inside his little brothers stomach and he didn't trust himself to somehow not get swallowed when he was swimming right on top of the liquid, ready to be
gulped down by his immature brother trying to prove himself. Already, the bottle started to tilt and with panic in his eyes, Derek gazed upon his brothers lips wrapping around the bottles opening, his face gazing at the sugary liquid he was about to devour with cold determination.
Derek swam away as fast as he could, but it was clear he wouldn't be able to outperform gravity. However, he had one last hope left: He could see that Adric, being the poser he was, was actually struggling to quickly swallow big sips of soda in sequence, so he might not be able to get all of the Coke down ! That meant that in-between his rather pitiful, strained gulps, Derek might have a chance to of latching himself somewhere inside his gigantic little brothers mouth, maybe under his plumb tongue or between his teeth and his lip. Perhaps going for his uvula or tonsils to hang onto would be an option as well... However, Derek was still steadily riding this dark, carbonated river straight towards Adrics greedy mouth, the boys tongue eagerly escorting sip after sip down his convulsing, smooth throat. Soon, the shadow of the boys lips descended upon his tiny brother as he was passing into Adrics humongous maw, and the glistening, squishy tongue was about to catch the teen scientist and maneuver him inside the boys body... What will Derek do?
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