This choice: Jack jumps to the back of the girl • Go Back...Chapter #5Furious Faye by: Tisch   Though his intent was to go around and startle people, Jack hadn't anticipated a pair of girls snagging his seat, and justifiably so, he was a little irritated. Therefore, Jack thought it best to get the attention of the girl who was sitting in his seat, with his backpack right next to her, and let her know what was going on. With that in mind, though, there wasn't any real easy way to do that. The girl was leaning forward, making it impossible for Jack to make a clean transfer from the back of the chair to her shirt without jumping. And jumping was an awfully dangerous method of getting from where he was to where he wanted to be. Jack looked down. It was a ways to the seat itself, meaning a fall and missing the girl could result in some serious injury. But Jack didn't know how much time he had to get the person's attention. He wasn't sure if he could climb down the chair, then climb up the girl. Doing so created the risk of Jack being unknowingly carried off by the girl to wherever her next destination was. Jack sighed, knowing his best option was, after all, jumping.
Jack took a few deep breaths and steadied himself. Regrettably, he looked down once more. The drop to the seat was a daunting possibility for Jack, but it wasn't the only one. Since the girl was leaning forward, her shirt drew up, exposing a chunk of her lower back and, consequently, a gap between her back and jeans. Jack gulped. The dark chasm visible from this angle was perhaps even more worrisome than the drop to the chair. "I will devour you" it rang out to Jack. He shook his head to gain his bearings, then looked at the back of the girl and prepared his leap. Closing his eyes, Jack sprinted forward and at the very tip of the back of the chair, Jack jumped with his best effort. He opened his eyes quickly whilst in the air and noticed the black and grey pinstripes of the shirt right in front of him. "Oh crap!" Jack yelled. He hadn't expected he would get to the girl's back as quickly as he did, and Jack stumbled to grab hold of the fabric. Along with the panic that was quickly setting in on Jack, the fabric of the shirt was far too difficult to grab on to. Because the girl was leaning forward, the fabric adhered firmly to her back and made it near impossible to pull it back. Screaming, Jack slid rapidly down the giant's back. What lay below him was the very cavern that Jack dreaded. Understanding that what was about to happen was inevitable, Jack closed his eyes and wished for the best.
*FOOMPH*
On the inside, two gelatinous spheres held its new captive with great strength. Its prisoner was fortunate enough to face away from the crack, yet that was a mere minor benefit. Jack was submerged just below the surface of this girl's butt crack, his hair slightly visible from the outside. Though he likely could have set himself free since he was so close to the surface, the amount of energy Jack lost when he felt the immediate grasp of two fleshy hills prohibited him from going anywhere. He instead tried calling out to the girl, but this wasn't what got the girl's attention.
On the outside, Faye jumped. "What's wrong?" her friend asked. Faye turned her head over her shoulder. "I don't know," she replied, "I think something just went down my pants". Her friend laughed. "That's unfortunate. Somebody make a perfect toss into your coin slot?". Faye rolled her eyes. "Very funny. I'll be right back, I don't want to get this thing out in public". The girl then got up and walked to the nearest bathroom. Inside, she locked herself in her stall and reached inside.
During the walk over to the bathroom, Jack felt the full force of being rubbed in between these pale mounds. They squeezed, battered, bumped, bounced, took everything out of Jack. He was nearly unconscious when the walking stopped, the cheek on either side of him significantly relaxed their grip on him, and light shown in above Jack. "Oh shit," Jack thought to himself. "What's she going to think?". Dainty fingers grasped Jack on the head and began pulling him out. "Ow!" Jack yelled. This startled the girl, and she hastily brought her hand out of her pants and flung it around in front of her face. She gasped. Jack meekly opened his eyes and met the angry gaze of the girl. She had black hair with purple streaks, pale skin, blue eyes, and a modest body. A combination, Jack thought at least, to be pretty menacing, especially considering she looked so mad.
"What is this!" the girl yelled. "Are you some sort of pervert?! How in the- what the- how?" she couldn't even finish her sentences she was so mad. So Jack spoke. "I-I know this looks real bad, but I promise, if you let me speak, I can explain this whole thing. First of all, I'm Jack..." he was cut off. "And I'm Faye. Now you're coming with me, and I swear, you're in some pretty deep shit right now, you best choose your words," the black-haired girl stated fiercely, then shoved Jack into her jeans pocket and left the bathroom.
After some time, Faye finally brings Jack out. Where are they?  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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