Susan Storm – known to most as the Invisible Woman – grimaced as she brushed more motor oil out of her hair. That last bout against the Doombots had been a particularly destructive battle and had left the heroes covered in quite a bit of grime.
As Susan watched the oil disappear down the shower drain, her seething anger at Doctor Doom prevented her from noticing a brief perimeter alert from HERBIE which quickly vanished.
So it was that Black Cat stealthily slid into the thirty-first floor of the Baxter Building, the building's defences registering her as Captain America.
It didn't matter one jot how smart Tony Stark or Reed Richards were. No amount of technological overthinking and security redundancies would protect the hero community's valuable data from Steve Rogers' utter inability to make sense of 21st century technology.
They were just lucky that Black Cat only wanted to cause chaos, not make a profit from selling dirty pics to the British tabloids (even she had to draw the line at selling to those parasites).
"And here we are Pete." Felicia said as she laid the tiny hero out on Susan's bed, next to a matching bra.
"Wha... where are we?" Peter asked, eyes adjusting to the light out of the box.
"Oh, don't pretend you don't know Peter." Felicia rolled her eyes. "I've seen you in and out of the Baxter Building many times. If you want to see Susan so much. Well, here you go." Felicia shrugged. "Spend some... personal time with her and then you'll see how much better a choice I am."
"Felicia! Wait I-"
Felicia need only raise a single finger to silence him. Cupping her ear in one hand, it was obvious to Black Cat that the Invisible Woman's shower was over.
"Bye! See you soon." She whispered with a smile, stealthily making her way back to the window she'd snuck in through.
And before anything else could be said, Felicia was gone.
Peter paled. While it was true that he'd been frequenting the Baxter Building more in the past few months, he hadn't been visiting Susan Storm. He had been visiting Johnny Storm. He'd felt him and his friend were drifting apart so he'd visited a few more times. And while yes, he'd run a few experiments with Mr. Fantastic and sparred a bit with the Thing, he could honestly say he’d not really crossed paths with Susan.
He could only imagine how angry she'd be when she found him.
Not to mention how awkward it would be when she turned invisible, and everyone saw a tiny Peter Parker hovering where her ass should be.
Then again, would Susan's powers even work on Peter? He'd never quite gotten an answer over whether Sue could only turn her suit of unstable molecules invisible or anything that touched her.
If it was the former, then Peter was really surprised that Susan didn't just go commando. Where would one get unstable molecule underwear?
Peter was shaken from those thoughts when the door to the bathroom opened, and Susan Storm walked out.
Peter swallowed a lump in his throat as he took in the giantess' naked body, her form only getting bigger as she stomped closer.
Of course, she didn’t need a towel when she thought she was alone.
"Hey! Hey! Susan!" Peter called.
But the giantess only grabbed her panties and quickly lowered Peter past the towering pillars of flesh that were legs.
Peter dared to look up, seeing a muscled butt looming over him like the Death Star.
Only a profound feeling of irony prevented Peter from having a mental breakdown. How many times had he checked out Sue's ass from behind? And now look at him.
He didn't mean anything by it though, but when he was constantly around muscular superheroines with toned butts... well he couldn’t help himself from staring constantly and... and... and... Peter was starting to understand why – despite his power and experience – he'd never been offered to join a hero group with female members.
But Peter was snapped out of those thoughts when he suddenly felt himself be squished between a pair of soft buttocks.
"Sue? Sue!" Peter called. He tried to squirm but whatever Felicia had done to him had still left him quite weak.
So, as he felt Susan Storm put on her bra, Peter knew he had no choice but to just bide his time and wonder whether or not he'd be seen when she used her powers.
1) Peter turns invisible with Sue when she flexes her powers, leaving him to try and get her attention.
2) Peter remains visible when Sue flexes her powers. And she is not happy at the intrusion.
3) After that last battle, Sue decides to stay in for the rest of the day, throwing on some sweatpants and crashing on the couch for a movie.
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