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Marco Diaz gets shrunken while surrounded by the "BIG" girls in his life.
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Chapter #4

Jackie noticed Marco on the ground.

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Marco stood at 2 inches tall on the doorstep of Jackie's house. He was currently calling out to the beautiful, gigantic teen as she was stepping back into her house, and straight towards him. If he didn't get her attention soon, it was likely that Jackie was going to step on him like the bug that he is now.

"HEY JACKIE! DOWN HERE! DON'T SQUASH ME!" Marco shouted while jumping and waving his arms. But it seemed that his cries still fell on deaf ears. Jackie still walked in his direction, not even hearing a trace of the screaming coming from the tiny boy in front of her.

Marco felt the ground shake with every step she took and it was only getting stronger as she came closer and closer to him. She was only a few steps away from crushing him with her enormous boots and Marco feared that this was it for him. He didn't have much time to move out of the way and realized that the girl he had a crush on for so long was just going to squash him into a pancake. He tried shouting even louder to get her attention but it was still no good

As Jackie's left foot made contact with the ground, the impact from her boot caused Marco to lose his balance and fall on his back. After that, he couldn't get up in time as he saw her lift her right foot off the ground. "Oh no." Marco said as the shadow of Jackie's boot cast itself over him. She lifted her foot right over him and Marco's pupils shrunk in horror as he saw it coming down on him.

The most beautiful girl he ever knew is going to squash him like a bug and there was nothing that he could do about it. Well, almost nothing.

"JACKIE!!! STOOOP!!!" Marco yelled at the top of his lungs as he watched the meteor-sized shoe descend upon him. He flinched and averted his gaze in terror as he was about to be crushed into a tiny red stain on the bottom of Jackie's boot. However, the crushing impact never came, much to Marco's surprise.

Slowly opening his eyes, Marco looked up and saw the sole of the massive boot hanging only a few inches above him. He hyperventilated in shock as he realized how close he was to being squished into nothing. The boot suddenly stopped just a few inches short of crushing him and retreated to its original position right next to Jackie's other foot.

Once Marco was no longer eclipsed by the boot's shadow, he sighed in great relief before looking up at Jackie's titanic form. "Huh? What was that?" Jackie asked in confusion. "I thought I just heard a voice and it kind of sounded like Marco." Jackie looked back and forth to find the source of the voice and Marco saw this as his chance to get her attention again.

Fortunately, Marco's pleas finally reached her ears. It was faint, but Jackie was able to hear where the voice came from and directed her gaze downward. From there, Jackie noticed a small dot on the ground in front of her. She bent down to get a closer look at it, and then kneeled to get even closer. Once she was on all fours, she squinted her eyes and slowly made out the dot that was calling to her.

"Marco?" Jackie gently laid her hand on the ground in front of Marco, and he climbed onto her palm as she slowly stood back up to her full height. "Marco, is that really you?" She asked, holding Marco up to her face.

"Yes Jackie, it's me." Marco answered. Jackie's eyes widened in shock. She couldn't believe what she was looking at. Her date was shrunken to a mere two inches tall and stood right in the palm of her hand.

Jackie then went back into her house and closed the door behind her before sitting on her couch with Marco still in her hand. "What happened to you, Marco?! How'd you get so tiny?" Jackie asked.

"I'm not sure I understand it either, Jackie, but I think Star might've had something to do with it." Marco answered.

"Figures." Jackie said. "So, did I really almost step on you outside?" Jackie asked in worry, and Marco nodded making her feel awful about what she almost did. But Marco assured her that he wasn't mad at her which helped Jackie to feel a little bit better.

"Okay. So, what do we do now?" Jackie asked. "We've got to call Star, Jackie. She can make me big again and then we can go on that date." Marco answered.

Jackie knew Marco was right since getting him back to normal was the right thing to do. However, once she got a good look at his tiny form, she began to think differently. "You know, Marco. You actually look pretty cute when you're tiny like this." Jackie said playfully, while petting Marco on the head with her finger.

"Jackie, what are you doing? And..." Marco saw the look on Jackie's face and grew rather nervous. "...why are you looking at me like that?" Marco nervously asked.

"Maybe we can wait a little bit before we get you back to normal, huh Marco. I think I can get used to having a little friend to pal around with." Jackie said, making Marco gulp with uneasiness. "I think we can still have that date we planned."

What happens next?

1. Jackie stays at home and has some fun with Marco.

2. Jackie leaves her house and takes Marco with her.

3. Jackie calls someone over for some fun with Marco.

4. Marco tries to escape from Jackie.

5. Something else.
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