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This choice: Shuichi runs for the chest while the Ogre goes for Naegi but he trips.... • Go Back...Chapter #4Shuichi runs for the chest while the Ogre goes ... by: Hiccan Makoto looked over his shoulder to see the ogre bearing down on him faster than he could've ever expected as well as his friend Shuichi running as fast as he could towards the chest in the other direction. He breathed a sigh of relief that he'd understood his plan then sharply turned to try and throw off the monsters balance. He sneaked a look to see if it'd worked and only saw a giant hand rapidly approaching and blocking out all light. He just barely ducked under it but still yelped when it snagged ahold of his hood. After a seconds thought he shrugged out of the jacketed cloak but clicked his tongue when his shirt went with it, He'd underestimated her speed, skill AND strength now. If it hadn't been for him being alot more nimble in the game she would've probably had him in a stew pot already. He heard a shout and saw that Shuichi had tripped and fell flat on his face. That was his last mistake though as in less than a second his small feet left the ground as he was scooped up by the monster. He beat and bit at the hand as she laughed at his fighting spirit.
"Ahahha! Come now my little treasure. You ran a good race and had a fine plan. No doubt you thought that you could distract me long enough for your friend to reach the chest and hoped I would honor my deal."
On the ground Shuichi clenched his fists as tears welled in the corner of his eyes. Her uproarious laughter did nothing but make the young Detective feel worse. When she suddenly picked him up like as well his stomach sank like a rock.
''Fret not I will honor our agreement young one.''
She gently placed Shuichi by the passageway he and Makoto had previously been taking shelter in as she returned with the still weak Rantaro and Nagito. She pulled off their bindings as Shuichi still trembled at how he'd failed his lucky friend. Komaeda's hand's flashed with weak electrical energy as he tried to muster up a spell.
''NAGITO STOP! DON'T DO IT!''
''What?! But-but Naegi why?!''
''Stop and think! If she wanted all four of us it'd be easy right now! If she's willing to take just me you guys should be happy and just go!''
''No that's wrong Naegi we can't leave you! Saihara tell her to take a piece of trash like me instead!''
''Nagito's right Makoto we can't just leave you here!''
''HA-HA YOU ARE A FINE GROUP OF ADVENTURER'S! Most have fled without a word or wasted their allies sacrice on attempts to defeat me. Such honorable actions greatly interest me. ''
''Wait-''
''No that will be enough actually humans. Farewell to you now."
With a strong breath she forced the three boys down the passage away from her and their friend. With ease she picked up a boulder and placed it in front of the hall effectively sealing it.
Seeing the anxious expression on her captives face she reassured him
"Worry not. They are unharmed I'm sure. I took great care in that all that would happen was they would be removed from the boulders path."
"We-well thanks for tha-UGAAHH!!"
Naegi's nervous thanks was cut off by a gigantic pair of lips covering not only his face but all his upper body in one giant smooch. He tried futiley and almost cutely to push back against it but it was like an ant against the ocean as he was pinned to the ogre's hand by the force that was it's lips. When he felt the monsters hot breath start to intake he could barely breath himself and when it's tongue snaked and dragged over him he couldn't do a thing. He wanted to laugh because by god it was the most ticklish thing he'd ever felt in his life. It felt as if it was made up of a million tiny feathers that were incredibly stiff yet still wet feeling, They sucked gently wherever they touched and if he focused through the tickle induced haze over his mind he could almost hear a million tiny pops as the tastebuds moved mournfully from one ticklish inch of his body then gleefully sampled another. His legs kicked and his fists beat on her chin trying to force her to free him, but when the tongue curled and began on his face all his limbs became so much useless jelly. He'd been tickled on his nose and cheeks before by his sister and while he hadn't liked it all, it hadnt made him convulse like this. The tongue dragged around searching for something. It investigated his ears a little bit before it found what it was looking for. His poor little lips were poked and lapped at like they were so much candy. It took every last ounce of energy little Naegi had to keep
them closed. Finally with a horrendous yet surprisingly gentle suck the giants kiss ended and Makoto was released from it. The giant smiled at the young lucky adventurer as he gasped for air.
''We-were-WERE YOU JUST TRYING TO EAT ME?!'' he screamed still dripping in saliva.
''Eat you? If I wanted to do that do you not think I would have there? That was but a gentle kiss to show gratitude for your telling your friends to leave the two of us be.''
''That-THAT'S NOT WHY I TOLD THEM TO LEAVE!''
''Oh? Then why did you? Could you have done it only because you knew that I could easily capture all four of you?''
''Well-It's....''
''Yes, Yes what you did was very brave and yes you are deliciously sweet. Now let us move on with this life of servitude of yours.''
Naegi shifted uncomfortably at the abrupt way she said such a horrible thing as he sat back up. Still barring some kind of miracle that seemed like what was going to happen here. There was no chance of him actually being able to defeat the ogre and he'd already tried a few times to remove the helmet and take himself out of this game. They hadn't heard a word from Chihiro since he'd put them in here. Makoto didn't want to doubt one of his friends but there was no way that Fujisaki didn't know what was going on in here. Had he maybe left the lab? Well then where could he have gone!?
''Remove your shoes pet.''
That snapped him out of any thoughts about the Ultimate Programmer and right back to the reality of this virtual reality.
''Wh-wha-what?! No-no I-I''
''No?! Who are you to be saying no to your owner? If I wished to eat you right here would you be able to stop me?''
''Wait pleas-''
A giant's finger suddenly shoved Naegi right back over onto his back. It pinned him down again and dug into his defenseless belly. He squirmed and squealed beneath the giant digit while the angry ogre continued.
''WaiaHHAaht!! Hehheeehahaha.''
''Are you going to stop me? If I wanted your feet bare I could do it but your here to be trained as a pet So remove your shoes as ordered or the punishment your going to get will be worse.''
''Puhuuahnishheeeh-SNNHEK HAAHHAA''
As the young Ultimate descended into snorting belly laughs he frantically waved his hands for it to stop. The cruel ogre stopped and looked quizzically at the boy who barely had the strength to to try and sit back up.
''The shoes, pet. Off. Now.''
''Pl-please don-'HEEEEHHIIIHEEENOOOOHO'
The finger went right back to it shoving him back down and dug back in as Naegi broke down into squeals. He beat on the finger which only made the giant sneer and dig into his stomach deeper.
''Ohhaakahy Ihihi gihieeve!''
''Very well.''
This time he wasted no time and got the shoes off quickly as the finger hovered over him threateningly. He showed the now empty boots to her then put his hands as if to show there was no tricks but was instead quickly dug back into. This time Makoto didn't even try and instead beat his fists meaninglessly while his ticklish tummy was tenderly tortured.
''Wahahy! Ihihi dihihd itehe-SNNNRK-KAHAHEHA!''
''Socks.''
"Snnnrrkk-Ahakay juhuhs tahahp"
This time the cherry red boy was quick to follow orders and get his socks off. His teary eyes looked up at the one who ordered them off as she scooped them up with his socks and gobbled them up. Then she came back for him with the damn finger. He tried to beg her not to but was quickly gotten again however this time she was much gentler drawing out giggles rather than snorting belly laughs.
"Heeheeeu I dihihd ihiht."
"Yes you did pet. This is a treat for you,unless you'd prefer how things were before?"
"NOohohha this is fiHEEHEne"
"Now you will show me your feet. They are prizes I would like to admire."
With that order she released him and watched expectantly. Makoto quickly sat up and unsurely presented his small feet. When the ogre motioned for it he raised them up, when it continued to motion he obeyed until eventually he was on his back once more but now with his feet in the air for the ogre to admire.
"Roll over and keep them in the air. Do not lower them or move them at all."
"O-o-okay.." he rolled upon his belly while keeping his small feet in the air. On the one hand he was extremely glad to have his tummy safe from the ogres probing digit, but with his feet now clearly it's new target-
Once more Naegi's thoughts were scattered by tickles overwhelming his brain. The ogres slimy tongue dragged across his unsuspecting soles and toes driving him wild. He immediately pulled away just on instinct.
"Ahahawait I wasn't expecting that. I'm sorry, please I'm sorry!''
''One more chance. 15 LASHES. MOVE AGAIN AND THE PUNISHMENT WILL BE SEVERE!
Naegi shivered at the expression on the giants face as he rolled back over. He didn't know what she meant by punishment but the severity of it would probably be bad. The tongue came again and Makoto's hands balled into fists.
That was one.
Naegi started pounding his fists as the second tongue lashing came, at three he bit his into his lip. At the fourth he realized that there was no chance he was going to be able to do this. indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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