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Nick swirls through a damp, confusing world. Zane has not swallowed yet, giving Jake a small amount of time to escape being dragged deeper. He can not see anything!
The tongue pulses beneath the chewed up hotdog, Zane is going to swallow soon.
Jake must act fast if he wishes not to end up where the food and everything else the enters here goes: the stomach.
Then Jake sees something!
Approaching is the dark chasm leading from the mouth into the deep abyss. Along the gate stand two monumental tonsils and above the plunge, a dangling flesh stalactite dripping with mouth slime.
Jake struggles against the current of food descending Zane's gullet. In an adrenaline-fueled burst of energy, he leaps...
…and grabs something!
Beneath him, the food get pushed into the esophagus towards the stomach. As for Jake, he has escaped the same fate.
He managed to grab hold of the fleshy uvula. But this is by far an awkward perch. As air rushes in and out of the Zane's lungs, the fleshy stalactite quivers like a wind chime. Plus flows of slime moisten the flesh.
must be as secure as ever if he wants to escape an unwanted skydive to hell...the digestive tract.
Jake pulls harder on the slick flesh, hauling himself up. Hugging a miniscule flap of flesh, he finally secures himself on the uvula. Nevertheless, sheets of mucus rub between his legs. He can hold on...but for only so long.
Suddenly his hold gets put to the test! The arch flesh pulses, causing the uvula to quiver. Though small to its owner, Jake experiences a sudden shock of motion sickness
The throat shakes, It is being irritated by the Jake!
Jake loses his grip and falls!
He narrowly missed the tongue, brushing the layer of saliva as he fell, covering his right arm in the thick spit.
As he fell, he realized he was headed straight for the windpipe. This wasn't bad, as he could potentially be coughed up.
He fell faster and faster, disappearing down the tube as it closed behind him, Zane was eating more of the hotdog.
Jake fell for just a few seconds more, before getting caught in a thick patch of phlegm that coated the walls of the trachea. He struggled in it, then realized that if he struggled enough, he might be able to make the jock sneeze.
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