This choice: No, he was caught by Toriel. • Go Back...Chapter #5Too late. by: Unknown "And where do you think you're going?"
Asriel's hand froze inches away from the doorknob. With a sheepish grin, he turned around and saw his mother staring at him sternly.
He had failed, he realized with dismay. He had been caught. But maybe he could convince her.
"Oh, I was just going outside for a walk," he said.
"Outside?" Toriel said in surprise, as if Asriel just told her that he was going to drive a car by himself, "My child, you haven't even eaten breakfast yet."
Ariel groaned inwardly. Breakfast was usually a feast, and he knew that he will be twenty pounds heavier afterwards.
"If I'm finished," he said, "can I go outside?"
"I'll think about it," said his mother.
Reluctantly Asriel waddled to the kitchen, where he obediently sat down at the table, the seat creaking under his bulk, and began to devour the mountains of food before him.
Toriel, as usaul, went all out with her cooking, and the table was crowded with pancakes, snail pie and other delicious food, and she was going to stand there and watch her son eat up every crumb.
She loved it when someone enjoyed her cooking! Especially if that someone was her son.
What happens next?
Choice 1: To Asriel's surprise, he asks for more food, and soon he forgets about his escape, getting fatter and fatter as the eager Toriel feeds him.
Choice 2: After a large breakfast, Asriel is allowed to leave the house, provided that Toriel accompanies him everywhere he goes.
Choice 3: Toriel agreed he could leave when the meal was finished. But what if it never does? She brings more food to feed her son, enjoying the sight of him eating.
Choice 4: something about watching Asriel eat gets To risk 'worked up'. She's a budding feedie and feels herself getting moist the more she stuffs her son.  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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