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A 10 year old girl by the name of Maggie was outside playing in her backyard wearing a green one-piece swimsuit. Which was something she did a lot during the weekends when she wasn't in school. Her folks owned a trampoline and an in-ground pool as well, so there was quite a few things she could do in the back of her property. They even had one of those lovely gazebos with an indoor fit pit to use. Which during forth of July or other special occasions, was packed with family and friends alike. Her neighborhood was one of those typical upper middle class ones. Which in turn meant it was relatively safe and a good place to raise kids. However now... a new neighbor had moved in and she was a little on the odd side. Maggie's parents didn't feel safe with their daughter being outside when she was without someone watching her or one of her friends being with her. So they thought she would be safe in their own backyard... so they thought however.
While she jumped up and down on her trampoline, someone was watching her. That someone was her neighbor. She watched Maggie closely and smiled as she jumped up and down on her trampoline. She got really excited when she did a back-flip and some other tricks she kind of knew how to do.
"Oh I wish you were just a bit older my dear... maybe then we could be together." The pervert neighbor said to herself quietly.
As Maggie flipped again, the neighbor put her plan into action and yelled out for some help. Maggie heard this and stopped immediately. She looked in the direction she heard this cry for help and rushed over to the tall fence on the left side of her property.
"Hel-Hello? Is someone there?" Maggie asked politely.
"Huh? Oh yes, I need some help. I've dropped my glasses and I can't see with out them. Could you please come help me?" her neighbor pleaded with her. Maggie paused and knew her parents told her to stay away from their neighbor on this side. Though they were never really clear on why this was the case. Maggie wasn't the type to ignore someone's plea from help. So she rushed over to her neighbor's yard and went into the back. She found the woman on the ground and she must have been in her younger 20's at best or if she was older, she really took care of herself and then some. She looked up and then asked if someone was there.
Maggie was a little hesitant at first to answer because she was still thinking of why her parents told her not to go over there. But she answered with a stuttered, "Ye-yes, yes I am miss." Her neighbor smiled and asked her to help her find her glasses. Maggie walked over to her slowly, but as she noticed where the glasses were, she moved in more quickly and handed it to her. Her neighbor grabbed them and placed them on.
"Oh-now! This is so much better. Thank you so much sweetie, I don't know what I would have done if you weren't so kind to help me." she said with a big happy smile.
Maggie blushed a little and said it was no problem. But as she was about to walk away, her neighbor stopped her and asked what her name was. Maggie turned to face her and once again was hesitant in responding, but did respond slowly but surely. "My-my name is Maggie, miss." Maggie left out her last name since she felt uncomfortable giving that out too.
Her neighbor smiled and complimented her cute name and then replied, "Well since you told me your name, it is polite for me to tell you mine. My name is Kelly Yang. It was nice to meet you Maggie." After Miss Yang finished her sentence, Maggie blushed once again with her nice words. But just as she was about to leave once more, she was stopped again!
"Oh by the way Maggie, I got this box in the mail and it was addressed to you. I was going to hand it to you, but no one seems to like me around here." Miss Yang said with a caring tone.
She handed Maggie the box and was about to open it, but Miss Yang stopped her just short of doing so and told her she needed to open it when everyone is asleep tonight and to tell no one about it. Maggie thought this was really odd, but the lady was very nice to her and she didn't seem so bad, plus she said it was for her and it came through the mail. So why would she lie? (in her childish mind, at least) Anyways, Maggie thanked her and left her backyard. Miss Yang smiled ear to ear as she watched Maggie walk away, admiring her young butt... despite being about as curve-less as any other 10-year old.
After Maggie returned home, she was so curious as to what was in the box. She looked at the box and it had her name of address, but where it came from was all faded out, almost like an old address sticker was used. But she awaited till nightfall to open it, even though again it made no sense to. When she opened it, it was...   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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