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The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.
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Chapter #5

You go looking for more revenge

    by: DrZaaijer Author IconMail Icon
Having a 'new boyfriend' reminded you of an old boyfriend, Scott who had you dated some time ago. The breakup you had with him wasn't pretty and you decided that now that you had the orb you would see him. You told Marcus to wait for you as you approached his house. His mother answered the door when you rang and you used your powers to convince Scott's mother, father and sister to go to a movie, which would leave Scott alone in the house with you.

You entered Scott's room.

"What they fuck you you doing here?" Scott demanded.

"I came to see you," you said in an overly calm tone.

"Well I am busy."

"Come with me," you told him using the orb to make him comply and stop cussing at you.

He followed you out of his room and towards his sister's bedroom. Scott's sister was a hot woman a couple years older than Scott. She liked to dress provocatively and flirt with guys, but she was really a tease and didn't go very far with the guys she flirted with. She liked the control it gave her over them.

Scott didn't know why he was following you, it didn't concern him at the moment. "Listen Laura, I don't know what you are trying to prove, but you should just leave. I have moved on."

You and Scott were now in Scott's sister's room. "You have? Interesting. I wonder what I have been missing. Take off all your clothes."

Scott did as he was told. "It doesn't matter. What we had is gone. To be honest I didn't really care much for you."

"But I cared for you," you replied. By this time you were looking through Scott's sister's drawers and selecting some clothes you found there.

"I know. It was for the best we broke up."

"You could have tried to let me down easy if you knew it wasn't going to work."

"That isn't how I am. You know that." By this time, Scott was completely naked.

"You are right, let's change that. Here put this on." You handed Scott some of his sister's clothing. You gave him a pair of green and white bikini low-rise panties with a matching strapless bra, a white sleeveless crop top that had a high neck. and a pair of skinny low-rise capri length jeans.

"OK, will you go now?" Scott said as he started to put on his sister's clothes.

"In a few minutes."

"What are you waiting for?"

"You'll see." Soon Scott was wearing the offered apparel. Even though the cups of the bra were empty the outline of the bra could be clearly seen under the top he was wearing. "Come with me to the bathroom." Scott did as he was told complaining that you should leave so he could get back to what he was doing before. He didn't realize that he was doing what you were telling him. Once in the bathroom you told him to put on his sister's makeup. He did the best he could with his unpracticed hand. Once he was done, you commanded him to look at himself in the mirror it was at this time you let him see what he had been doing.

"What is going on," he demanded. "Why am I wearing lipstick?" This was the most obvious of the makeup he was wearing.

"It's not only lipstick."

Looking again he saw everything. "Oh my god." He wanted to run and take everything off, but you wouldn't let him.

"What is wrong?" you inquired.

"I'm wearing girl's clothes."

"What's wrong with that?" Now you put into Scott's mind the delusion that he isn't seeing his own face (and body) but he would see his sister's face, Theresa.

"I look like Theresa!" he said in shock.

"Of course you look like Theresa. You are Theresa." Now Scott thought that he was Theresa. The panic left his voice (and his mind) What he now saw in the mirror was quite ordinary. He saw Theresa wearing Theresa's clothes and that's who he thought he was. "Why don't you go to your room and watch TV or something." Scott left the bathroom and went to Theresa's room to do as you said. You put into Scott's mind that no matter what was said or what was shown to him, he would always know he was Theresa. You you left the house you thought, "Welcome to the loony bin Scott."

You have the following choices:

1. Follow Scott as his family retuirned home.

*Noteb*
2. You and Marcus continue on your adventures

3. You wait for Scott's family

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