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Rated: GC · Interactive · Adult · #2005793

Punk rocker Crystal experiences a nightmare of a performance, to the audience's delight.

This choice: Crystal cuts through the park. This is too important to stall!  •  Go Back...
Chapter #8

Crystal cuts through the park. This is too impo...

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Crystal moved out of the residential area she parked in within two blocks and made her way to the outskirts of the park. The first thing she noticed was that it was hot. Even the very breeze was hot, and the layered paper made areas of her body almost immediately perspire. Her thighs were skinny, and did not rub much together, but each time they managed to she felt the paper shift slightly, which only made her more nervous. She kept her arms rather still, as she felt her tube top continue to loosen.

She did not look and see if anyone was staring actively, but she really only noticed a couple glances. Even from up close looking at herself, she had to admit her job was pretty decent. Due to the bright white nature and the beating sun between the clouds, the layers and folds of the paper were not really noticeable. She looked mostly like she had some white shorts and a white tube top. Perfectly normal for the weather, even.

The biggest issue, really, was the hot sidewalk. She had no shoes, and almost wished she wrapped her feet (though thought later that that would not have lasted long at all). She glanced at her phone. Things were going fine, though, and she just had to tough it through. She had made up five minutes. She had 35 minutes to her destination, and 40 minutes left till noon, and now she was at the edge of the park.

You have the following choices:

1. The nice weather has brought many people to the park.

2. The weather turns sour, and a hot rain begins.

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