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After her Big Mistake, Mackenzie finds herself still subject to ENF misadventures.
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Chapter #5

"Knock on someone's door!"

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"What? Do what?" Willow's voice was clearly panicked, but she was also trying to do her best not to shout too loudly for fear of drawing someone's attention. "Just let me in already, Mackenzie!"

"I will," promised Mackenzie, trying and failing to keep her voice level through her fits of giggles. "But first...you have to knock on someone's door."

There was a shocked silence, then Willow said "What?"

"You heard me! Knock on someone's door and wait for them to answer it. Then I'll let you back in."

"No way in hell am I doing that! They'll see me naked! Let me in right now or I'll kill you!"

Mackenzie leaned her back against the door and casually pulled the towel off her head, letting her damp red hair tumble down around her bare shoulders. "That's not much of an incentive for me to let you in, is it?" She smirked to herself. "Hey, it's up to you. You can either knock on someone's door and have them see you naked for a second, or you can stay out there all day and have the whole building see you naked. Maybe somebody'll be nice and give you clothes...but I wouldn't bet on it."

Another moment of silence passed, and Mackenzie could tell Willow was doing furious calculations in her head. They both knew that the girls in this building would find Willow's predicament hilarious - Willow herself had found it hilarious when she had thought it was happening to somebody else.

"Fine!" Willow's exclamation was so sudden it startled Mackenzie. "I'll do it! But you're going to pay for this!"

Out in the hall, Willow looked nervously both ways - no one seemed to be coming yet. Then, covering her nudity with her arms as best she could, she half ran, half tip-toed to the nearest door and knocked quietly.

There was no answer.

Immediately, Willow was back at the door to their room. "There! I did it! Now let me in!"

"Nice try!" laughed Mackenzie. "Nobody answered. That's not very funny. Try another door unless you want to stay out there for the rest of the day."

"You..." Willow's fury almost got the better of her, but she managed to restrain herself. "You're evil," she hissed instead through gritted teeth, then ran to another door and banged on it.

She stood there for a moment, shivering, naked, and red-faced. Then the door swung open, and Willow saw with sudden horror that the person standing there was none other than...
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