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After her Big Mistake, Mackenzie finds herself still subject to ENF misadventures.
This choice: Her suit experiences problems all on its own.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

Her suit experiences problems all on its own.

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She sees commotion in the deep end of the pool and leaps into action. What she failed to notice was her suit was torn on the wooden chair when she jumped from her tower. The top of her suit to her butt had torn apart. As she dove into the pool she swam right out of her suit which stayed right at the surface, very close to the pool intake. She swam down to the bottom of the pool and pulled a young boy up out of the deep end and with some help from some of the fathers who gathered around the edge of the pool lifted him out of the water and out onto the patio.

As she watched the boy get layed onto his back she realized she had lost her suit. While this realization hit her she began scanning around the pool for her missing suit. Thats when she heard one of the men standing over the boy shout "I think he needs CPR!"
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