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Rated: E · Interactive · Thriller/Suspense · #1983547
Portals, inter-dimentional shrinking, boys. Maybe some other stuff
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Chapter #5

Worse

    by: NEDM (TwoTailedMoon) Author IconMail Icon
There! You shout in triumph. You had just initiated the closing program of the portal. Just as you were about to let out a humongous sigh of relief, a huge red error appeared on screen.

[Cannot close due to obstruction]

"Obstruction?" You turned around and became pale with fear. Behind you was an enormous hand.

"Oh my god" You watched as the giant glistening hand poked and prodded at the many wires and components of the room.

"No! Please don-t do that! Please! You need to back away from the portal!

"Huh?" Ryan seemed to notice your tiny voice. The curious twelve year old stared at you passed his wrist.

Just as you were about to repeat your request, the palm of the giant hand suddenly turned towards you.

"H-hey!" You watched fearfully as the large palm came closer. It was visibly covered with a layer of sweat.

"No!" You attempted push it away, causing you to actually make contact with the giant sweaty hand. The enormous thick fingers closed around you, pulling you into the warm wet surface, lifting you up off your feet.

"PLEASE NO!! LET ME GO!! STOOOOP!!"
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Ryan appeared as if he was in awe as he pulled his coiled fist out of the strange hole.

[Obstruction cleared, Initiating closing sequence]

To both of the boy's shock, the strange hole vanished the moment Ryan pulled his hand away.

"That was weird..." Andrew muttered, not sure of how to make sense of what they just saw.

Ryan just stood there silently, staring at his fist.

"What is that?" Andrew asked, pointing at his best friends enclosed hand.

The boy opened his fingers, revealing the tiny man.

"Coooooool~"

Both boys brought their excited faces close, eager to examine their new capture.

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